五年級英語作文及點評：My English Teacher

 　　My English Teacher

　　Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.

　　【要領點評】

　　這篇作文的題目是“我的英語老師”，是一篇介紹人物的作文。小作者開門見山，直接點題，首先介紹了英語老師的姓名，然后逐一介紹了她的外貌特征、喜好、英語水平、上課特點以及師生情感等。

　　小朋友們在寫作文時，要注意使用自己 熟悉的詞[組]，以免寫出一些錯句子。寫作時要注意意思連貫、語句通順、標點正確、書寫清晰、規(guī)范等。